Write argument essay with introduction and 3 paragraph and conclusion. the topic is Music.

Write argument essay with introduction and 3 paragraph and conclusion. the topic is Music. what do you think about music. what are the importance of music in your life. (do not copy from internet based websites) 

I start working on this essay but my grammar is not good. if you want you can look at this paper what i did. i am going to attach the file.